The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?
Control on the spread of infection is necessary to maintain a healthy environment in the society. Some people believe that the Government must make a budget to control diseases and its associated risk at preliminary steps instead of spending money on drug and cure. In my opinion, I completely agree to control these hazards at initial stages, so that the chances of contamination can be lowered within the society and a large amount of public money can be saved.
Prevention of infection is vital as some disease are not curable therefore the government should raise funds to prevent such infections. Taking control of preliminary stages can save many lives and make the environment healthier and more fit for the people. For instance, In India polio vacation campaign is still working as the scientist are unable to invent medicine for the treatment. In addition to that, one infection is always associated with another one, therefore, prevention of one infection can stop the rise of the other one.
Treatment is another factor which involves a huge amount of money from the government as well as from the public pocket to cure deadly diseases. Various medicines are costly, especially which are life-saving drugs and instruments used in diagnosis required a large amount of fund to procure and maintain in the hospitals. Hence, actions before the spread of diseases act as a money-saving step. For example, a recent survey conducted by the National Health Institute has shown that 90 per cent of the medical budget involves curing deadly diseases.
In summary, the cost-effective away to make the life disease free is to prevent the infections and the government must increase the funding to take necessary actions. Public awareness plays a vital role In preventing infections, thus authorities should focus on these activities as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8185023604 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3527158806 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124770770271 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441806195559 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044470585383 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766955095936 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354916861326 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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