The charts below show information about three different deserts around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The given tabular representation describes the data about the various desert in the world. Record contains mainly three ocean of the sand: Sahara desert, Taklimakam Desert and great basin desert.
As seen clearly from the first table, Sahara desert is the one of the largest desert in the world with 9,000,000 sq meter, whereas taklimakam desert take place in second position with 337,600 sq km. Moreover considering the rainfall, desert in Asia has minimum rain in east part of the sandy region about 1.0 cm, while west side has a bit more rain about 3.8 cm.
Moving further, temperature ratio in Great basin desert and Sahara desert almost equal to each other. Furthermore, in desert in Asia has recorded extremes temperature about -26.1 C, which is the lowest in three sandy region. Same as in other side highest temperature accounted in desert in North America, which is one celsius less than temperature in sandy part of the Africa.
Overall, Sahara desert is the biggest desert. Also, Taklimakam desert get less rainfall compare to other desert.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'ocean' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'oceans'.
Suggestion: oceans
...the world. Record contains mainly three ocean of the sand: Sahara desert, Taklimakam ...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... in second position with 337,600 sq km. Moreover considering the rainfall, desert in Asi...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'region' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'regions'.
Suggestion: regions
...1 C, which is the lowest in three sandy region. Same as in other side highest temperat...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, moreover, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 24.0651302605 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06285714286 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4225067132 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6778845373 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152889703972 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081690323711 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03335114465 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112388964029 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383590878381 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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