In some countries, the birth rate is slowing, the problem of an aging population, what is the causes and effects of this issue? How to solve this problem?
There are some countries facing a fierce low birth rate and the aging population in the world. This essay will elaborate the reasons and impacts of this issue and provides possible solutions for it.
There are several reasons of low fertility rate. Firstly, the trend of women participant in the labor market and insufficient support for them both work and child-rearing. Secondly, the deterion in employment of young people which leads people dedicate their time to work for gaining more money. Thirdly, high financial burden of childcare and education. These three are the main reasons result the low birth rate and it is widespread in the world.
While the problem of demographic occurred, aging population also has negative impacts on workforce. Due the advanced health services, people have longer expectancy life, hence it also become a problem to them which is they have to save more money to support themselves after retirement otherwise they family have to take the responsibility to take care their parents and the financial burden also cause young couples away to have their kid.
Many governments start taking actions on these problems. Policies of reducing tax and offer subsidies for childcare are implementing in many countries to stimulate the birth rate. For instance, the Hungarian woman who have four babies or above deserve tax free and yearly subside for their kids until 18 years old. Government in Taiwan determine to extend the legal retirement age from 60 to 65 years old in 2010 which can ease the lack of workforce for a while. Immigration also can be a method for the problems resulted by aging population, the Australian government opens opportunity for other nationalities to immigrate there as a part of their workforce.
In conclusion, governments need to take actions on low birth rate and aging population, otherwise they may face lack of workforce and other unpredictable problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...e longer expectancy life, hence it also become a problem to them which is they have to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 312.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1891025641 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77443236253 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0824306334 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.933333333 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171774095679 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598741569893 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558656997627 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108689853434 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689584191796 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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