Some people think that art is an important subject for students at high schools. Others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The table shows Australia company profits before tax for the period 1986_90 in four sector manufacturing, mining, trade and other
The most important sector was manufacturing, where profits nearby doubled from 1986 to 1989 to peak as $8.6 billion, followed by mining, where profits reached almost $5 billion in 1989_90, after fluctuating just below $4 billion for the previous three years.
profits in retail trade also grew strongly during the year period, doubling to just below $1.4 billion .in other industries three was steady growth in profits for three from $1.2 billion to almost $1.7 billion; followed by a crash to below $0.4 billion in 1989 to 1990
Overall, after consistent rises from 1986 to 1989, profits in retail trade leveled off from 1989 to 1990, while those in manufacturing and other industries both fell. In other industries, the fall was particularly sudden to less than a quarter of their 1989 level .only mining, where profits had been steady from 1986 to 1989 showed a significant rise in profits in 1989 to
1990
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... less than a quarter of their 1989 level .only mining, where profits had been stea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52582841303 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9728093061 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 288.0 106.682146367 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 20.7667163134 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0488066349857 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368118243473 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0138774847051 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0371278368819 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00915602942713 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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