You recently traveled on a train which arrived very late and you faced many problems
write a letter to the owner of the company
-Where were you going
-what problems did you face
-what action would you like the owner to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the time punctuation of the trains.
I booked a trip from Toronto to Montreal on 5th of this month. It was scheduled to reach Montreal at 11 in the morning. I was traveling there to attend a court hearing for an unfair job dismissal.
The train reached Montreal an hour late. For this reason, I missed my hearing and the judge ruled out my case because of my absence. Now I have to bear all the expenses of my lawyer and will never receive any compensation from my previous employer. All this because of a late train.
I am really disappointed by the service as trains are not following rules regarding time punctuality. I would like you to take immediate action and implement a system to inform customers in advance of any possible delays so they can plan their journey accordingly.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Ahsan Abid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... can plan their journey accordingly. I look forward to your reply. Yours fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, look, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82390879135 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689440993789 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2537153231 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.087306213587 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027804538483 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466687883615 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385707546749 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055640699225 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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