Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
this topic addresses the controversial issue of whether corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate in or the corporations are responsible for making a lot of money as long as they operate under the law. While the primary objective of any corporation is to make a profit, one must not be negligent towards the society and the environment in which they operate. one may argue that since the corporations are bound under certain laws it is not the responsibility of the corporations to woory about the society or environment. Nevertheless, since the society and the environment form the very foundation of the corporation directly or indirectly it is incumbent on a corporation to be aware of its obligations towards the social and environmental needs.
In addition to the laws under which the corporations operate, coporations have to take step fruther in their contribution to social and environmental attributes. it behooves on a corporation to do so because the laws under which they operate may be weak or outdated. For example, the laws may prohibit the corporations from disposing the chemical waste into the rivers. The corporation, in addition to following these laws, can support the initiative for the "Go Green" movement by enforcing the reduction in the use of paper and by upgrading their machines to energy efficient, renewable energy sources. this small step taken by the company might contribute to the environment in the longer run. The government may identify this noble act of the corporation and may consider renewing the laws thereby ensuring that the laws are upto date.
if the corporations only follow the laws under which they operate, the situation may worsen. The outdated laws may govern issues which were concering previously but now are irrelevant. In such a situation, the effect of blindly following these laws may prove to be detrimental to both the society and environment. For example, if the government does not order to evacuate a nuclear disaster, high energy radiation prone area, like Chernobyl for example, the corporations that are money minded would still continue to operate in such areas. this would lead to nothing but harm to both environment and the society. The people there would be affected by cancer and other deadly diseases and it would continue for generations. if a food based corporation operates there, it would be an alarming concern as the food would be contaminated with radiation. On realising this the sales would plummet and the corporation may shut down for good. In this way, if the corporations neglect their reasoning and blindly follow the rules the effects would be harmful to everyone including the corporations themselves.
one can argue back and forth on this issue as it is highly controversial. considering the betterment of the society, social health, environment and keeping in mind the future generations, an organisation must put aside its selfish needs to make a lot of money and must strive towards contributing to the society and environment in addition to the rules under which they operate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2676.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20622568093 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05477457697 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447470817121 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 855.0 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0771715174 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4761904762 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61904761905 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335846482823 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110461981246 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106939947549 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216871639695 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117917508612 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.