The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. And make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of world’s land area and population, respectively.
By observing the key features of both pie charts, it is obvious that Asia and Africa comprise both largest and most populated areas, while Antarctica and Oceania have got the least populated and smallest areas of the world.
More than half of the world’s area is consisted in Asia, however, no such thing can be said about this vast continent’s population. While the South American Territorial ground is 2 times larger than Oceania (12% in compare to 6%), its population is 11 times greater than that of Oceania. Interestingly, Antarctica comprise 9% of the world area, no one lives there by far.
North American grounds comprise more than half of what the Asian grounds stand on. It is understandable that by having more territorial grounds, Asia is the most populated continent with more than half the world’s population in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03937732369 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9559063682 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105907141169 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572430605813 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044973011717 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834300845553 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386949033037 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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