Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Co-education system has always been a topic of debate for many years. Some people opine that segregated gender education should be provided to children, while opponents
insist co-education is more advantageous. This essay will discuss both the positions and will state my opinion that studying in mixed schools is more beneficial as it inculcates the qualities of broad-mindedness and respect for the opposite gender among the children.
On the one hand, providing education to girls and boys in separate schools is considered better in many ways. Firstly, juveniles studying in single-gender schools have
more concentration in studies, as they remain deviated from other teenage activities such as having crushes and affairs. For instance, in the recent study, it was stated that the majority of students scoring high grades in board exams are from single-sex schools. Secondly, segregated gender education generates the qualities of independence,
freedom of speech, confidence among the students. In the survey conducted by Hindustan Times, 70% of the girls in Indian sports are from girls oriented schools, the
reason behind this high percentage is the comfort, independence and confidence they gather in front of the same gender.
On the other hand, the co-education system is supported by numerous people as it helps in generating more social values and respect for the opposite gender among children. Primarily,
by studying in mixed schools the thinking of students become more rational, which helps them to deal with gender equality. Next, educating the children in co-education
schools help them to understand the social behaviour of the opposite sex. In other words, girls and boys studying together generally respect their fellow mates and this led
to low rate in gender crime. To exemplify, a study by California University, the number of rapes and be minimized by educating children in mixed schools.
To conclude, although single-gender educational institutions provide comfort and independence, in my opinion, the understanding of gender equality and rationalization are major benefits that co-education system provides to students. In the near future, with the expansion of modernization, mixed schools will definitely become a
necessary for a child's growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61781609195 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0355968762 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5237812546 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260650142365 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909722181475 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573594460331 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975985679236 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060961673594 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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