Poor Students or students who come from rural areas often find it is difficult to get access to the university education, so some people think universities should make it easier for them to study at. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern educational ecosystem its almost impossible for economically weaker class students to get an access to graduation courses at the universities. Many individuals feel that universities should take steps to ease out situation for such students . This writing partially agrees with this statement and facts are further reviewed in this essay.
India in contemporary times has become an expensive place to live in. Education for instance which is the basic right in modern economies has become a commodity , with an access to only a few who can effort it. Researches in India have shown that almost 70% of students who get top notch positions in higher secondary exams are from villages or from economically weaker sections of society and hardly 10% of these students make it to the graduation level. We can see here that only a handful of deserving students make it to the graduation schools and rest all are drop outs from education system which is indeed a great loss of talent and definitely calls for some action from the government for reservations for economically backward section as well as rural area pupil.
On the other side, there needs to be a delicate balance on the reservations in the admissions process for Universities. For instance in the current scenario with all the reservations that Indian system has only 10% seats are available for Open category boys . Due to this scenario many non deserving candidates would reach out to prestigious colleges owing to their reservation quotas and would actually struggle and may leave the course mid way and finally waste the seat that could accommodate a deserving candidate. So its indeed vital to keep a check on reservation quotas at universities.
To conclude this I pen down by saying that reservations for deserving economically backward students is a awesome gesture that needs to be seriously implemented however , there needs to be a delicate balance here.
Reservation should only be a small percentage otherwise many non deserving students from economically backward will consume seats of deserving candidates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, however, may, second, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19764011799 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94269776204 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545722713864 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4311254 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.538461538 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199288732858 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720481513455 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571286306727 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107740540824 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624779273241 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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