Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion ?
With the rapid development of technologies and the Internet, people tend to have more choices. While some people believe that this has helped making our lives become easier, others would think that we are now having to face with too many choices. In this essay, I will point out the two main reasons to support the view that people nowadays have too many choices.
First of all, living in the Internet and Digital era, we cannot help but face with the explosion of excessive information. Information is practically everywhere, and within just one click of a button, people can find many reference sources from various websites. This has led to a dilemma of having too many choices to choose from. Whether it is a hard decision such as which schools to attend to or which jobs to apply for, to an easier choice like purchasing necessities such as food, clothes, etc., the Internet has it all covered for people. It can serve as a helpful yet a difficult tool at the same time.
Second, brands, both old and new ones, are now struggling to compete in the market. The pressure for companies to boost sales has forced them to constantly increasing their advertisements and marketing campaigns. As a result, the customers have to face with so much information from various brands, each with a unique feature. Therefore, they would likely to find it harder when considering which brands to choose from.
In conclusion, choices exist everywhere, which can make our lives easier yet more complex. People now have more considerations, yet it is not easier to choose compare to the old days. It would be best if we spend more time to take all into considerations and choose for ourselves the best alternative that most suits with our needs and wants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
...ome people believe that this has helped making our lives become easier, others would t...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to compare'
Suggestion: to compare
...rations, yet it is not easier to choose compare to the old days. It would be best if we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, as for, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63545836176 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.864436554 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232943850263 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814704428279 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919439035309 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149750425508 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134786398561 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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