Human activity has had adverse effects on plants and animals. Some people think that its too late to solve this issue, while others believe that necessary steps should be taken to overcome this problem.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Society has evolved through the number of revolutions eg. Green, White revolution and industrial revolution and this progress have happened at the cost of natural resources. Plants and animals are the most effective parties of this development. I shall shed light on the views of how adverse effects could be avoided and what is the stuff that will continue to damage nature.
Firstly, the growing demand for housing for society is causing harm to forests and wildlife, so this need for shelter for human should be met by building new houses at infertile lands. There is a classic example of Ambey Velly, a society in the city of Mumbai, this housing complex has been constructed in a remote area where there was not even wildlife loss. Secondly, the construction of roads or railway tracks is the reason for the loss of plants and animals and many governments have started building elevated roads to reduce the catastrophic effect. So the belief of a change in actions to eliminate the negative impacts has been proved right.
On the other side, there are certain human activities which can not be discounted at any cost eg rising demand for electricity has been met through atomic energy sources due to economic reasons. And this could not be avoided in the near future until we develop a better source of electricity than atomic. So the view of human activity shock the nature stands be true.
To conclude, I must say that we should opt the optimized approach to safeguard nature rather than damaging it for tiny economic interests.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87404580153 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53614681626 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9031781517 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160417560279 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610304528639 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451154907833 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914490411237 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471784759605 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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