In today's world, competition is very stiff and people work very hard to achieve what they desire. In this world which is harsh and full of difficulties, most people seek a place away from the crowd to find some peace and solace. Sahara or Antarctic isn't only popular places on this list. Unfortunately, when people find any such place, they ensure to destroy it before moving to the next one and this is the reason, our earth is getting warmer each day.
Now that people earn a lot and have an unlimited amount of money to spend but what they miss is an adventure. So, in order to have fun and also to show the world that they actually have some guts, they decide to take part in the adventures trips. Even though the trips are adventures and wonderful for a short period of time but they start to take a toll on people as well as on the places in the long run. Millions of people visit isolated places every year and leave tonnes of garbage behind. This affects wildlife severely. People who take long trips to extreme cold areas also have bad impacts on their bodies. Frostbitten nose, ear, and toes are very common among such people. While people visiting places with very warm conditions may face dehydration, rashes, and other skin related issues.
In conclusion, I personally think that when people visit such beautiful places, they should ensure that places remain untouched and that their deeds are not harming wildlife in any way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...e peace and solace. Sahara or Antarctic isnt only popular places on this list. Unfor...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...re adventures and wonderful for a short period of time but they start to take a toll on people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63921568627 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21155610197 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9495828462 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5833333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175912871181 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695185974841 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475208693896 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128709908772 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00565105350036 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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