The table shows the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturing in the 2005 and 2006.
The given table demostrate Global marketing share of cellphones companies in continues two-year 2005 and 2006.
First of all, Nokia had been maintain first place of share market and increase 2.5% share market in 2006. it is 35%.in addition, Motorola and Sony Ericsson had risen their market shares in next year.it is 17.7% to21.1% and 6.3% to 7.4% respectivaly.
while, all another companies are not maintain they profits and loss to global market selling ratio.Although samsung industry had not maintain his selling and decline 12.7% to 11.8% in 2006.secondly, L.G and Ben Q mobiles were also got loss in 2006.it is 0.4% and 2.5% are respectivaly.following this trend other mobile companies were also drawback they profits 19.2% to 16.2%.
In conclusion it is clearly depicts the Nokia,Motorola and Sony Ericsson were risen they sharemarket next year while all another companies were got loss in 2006.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...nd 2006. First of all, Nokia had been maintain first place of share market and increas...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...and increase 2.5% share market in 2006. it is 35%.in addition, Motorola and Sony E...
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Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...o21.1% and 6.3% to 7.4% respectivaly. while, all another companies are not maintain...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
... while, all another companies are not maintain they profits and loss to global market ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...and loss to global market selling ratio.Although samsung industry had not maintain his s...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...ratio.Although samsung industry had not maintain his selling and decline 12.7% to 11.8% ...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: G
...line 12.7% to 11.8% in 2006.secondly, L.G and Ben Q mobiles were also got loss in...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'profit'
Suggestion: profit
...obile companies were also drawback they profits 19.2% to 16.2%. In conclusion it is c...
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Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Motorola
...nclusion it is clearly depicts the Nokia,Motorola and Sony Ericsson were risen they share...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24827586207 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98478105643 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.663796869 43.030603864 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.2 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4 5.23603664747 313% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230827136628 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14670682924 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916906220743 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156831276785 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935425851813 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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