Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is a lack of discipline in these new schools. For that, some people say that teachers are responsible for the regulation, while others believe that this is the parents' role. I think teachers and parents, both are responsible for this. This essay shall discuss both the aspects in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some actions which should taken by the teachers in schools for the discipline. Firstly, teachers should provide the knowledge of discipline in the class. So, students can implement the strictness in their daily life. Secondly, schools should make strict rules regarding to breaking the regulations. If any students would break discipline, then teachers should punish in front of other students. So, it stops others to can not perform same mistakes in the future. To quote an instance, fear of being punish, make students regulated in schools. Thus, actions taken by mentors are important.
Turning to the other side of the argument, parents are necessary factor in their children life to maintain discipline. Parents should provide positive environment to their child. Having a positive environment, makes children feel better and they can become well being and discipline. Moreover, parents should give duty of their personal work for the completion. So, it helps the children in time management, which is a part of the discipline. Also, parents should scold their children for the bad activities, so they can not do the same thing again.
To recapitulate, parents and teachers are important factors for the students. Their actions make children to follow the rules and regulations. So, I deem that both work should improve discipline amongst the students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
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Message: Did you mean 'have taken' or 'take'?
Suggestion: have taken; take
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26470588235 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70943660432 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511029411765 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3641359258 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.1904761905 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9523809524 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220211666905 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686583079711 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697492359963 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146343573829 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107050790595 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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