Many university students live with their families while other live away from because their universities are in different places
Nowdays, it is believed that some college students live with their families than others live away because their college are diverge location. In this essay, I completely agree that more advantages than disadvantages. For some reason such us student are able to compress daily needs cost, cheaper amount of education cost and the main profit is can help their parents
In the one hand, the advantages is to compress the daily needs cost. It because they not necessary remove money to purchase meal and beverages. For example my friends who live with her family always have breakfast at home and carried box meals to have lunch was able to keep 50.000 allocation to eat from her parents as result in the last month she obtain saving almost one million rupiah. It is important to possess saving money for spare college cost. The other profit is to suppressed the amount of education cost. For example the student who live at home with their family are able to utilize device which support education like printer without have to pay it. So the totally education for four years was lessen. It is important to lightened parents load. And the last positive impact is able to aid parents because their still execute daily duty. For example sweep and mop floor before their leave to college in the morning. It is able to establish their parents assisted
On the hand the disadvantage of some college live in different place from their parents is wasteful. Is due to students continence many cost for their daily need. For instance they spend some money for survive not only eat but little things other. Therefor their relegation will bloat. It is no doubt that established their lose out. There was additional negative impact, student continence had distance with their parents its because not definite one in month their are able back to home. Several scholars in foreign home sick cause that. It was maked them not focus to study. It to important prepared their mental. I do not believed that college student shall got the detriment. So that was important to reminder all advantages. In my opinion scholar student must give priority to positive impact cause that have good bump into parents. In conclusion from where I trusted live in equal location for students college was bigger advantages than live with distance with their parents
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'diverged'.
Suggestion: diverged
...ers live away because their college are diverge location. In this essay, I completely a...
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Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs cost" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'cost' or 'to be cost'.
Suggestion: cost; to be cost
...tudent are able to compress daily needs cost, cheaper amount of education cost and t...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs cost" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'cost' or 'to be cost'.
Suggestion: cost; to be cost
...vantages is to compress the daily needs cost. It because they not necessary remove m...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'obtains'.
Suggestion: obtains
...parents as result in the last month she obtain saving almost one million rupiah. It is...
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Line 3, column 710, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lessened'.
Suggestion: lessened
...he totally education for four years was lessen. It is important to lightened parents l...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cost seems to be countable; consider using: 'many costs'.
Suggestion: many costs
...wasteful. Is due to students continence many cost for their daily need. For instance they...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...tinence had distance with their parents its because not definite one in month their...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...s its because not definite one in month their are able back to home. Several scholars...
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Line 5, column 682, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ollege student shall got the detriment. So that was important to reminder all advantage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89646464646 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34032333338 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502525252525 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1481753933 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.56 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.84 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336501160881 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934211193168 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106183959382 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266179170913 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654222990414 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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