The maps : summarise the changes to Liverpool john moores university from 2010 to 2016.
The given two map depicts significant change in liverpool john moores academy duration in 2010 to 2016.It is clearly see their are number of changes are accord in this time period.
First of all, In 2010, There are separate building for different subjects like Biology, Chemistry, and Physics.In addition, left of top corner library is establish and in addition, there are two separate parking area for students and professors and roads are rough.Although one main admin building for reception.
While, In 2016, The figure is completely change during six years time period.There are number of changes are accord firstly is, they 3 different building convert in to in one main science school, next is library facility is improving and add computers and it department in library for student uses.Secondly, most considerable change is one parking area are vanished and build a new lecture theater center and another car parking change in to bus parking areas.In add, New building cafe is add in campus. Moreover, Rough roads are convert in to a new cement road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'map' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'maps'.
Suggestion: maps
The given two map depicts significant change in liverpool...
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Suggestion: It
...moores academy duration in 2010 to 2016.It is clearly see their are number of chan...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seen'.
Suggestion: seen
... duration in 2010 to 2016.It is clearly see their are number of changes are accord ...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ation in 2010 to 2016.It is clearly see their are number of changes are accord in thi...
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Suggestion:
...are number of changes are accord in this time period. First of all, In 2010, Th...
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Suggestion: In
...ts like Biology, Chemistry, and Physics.In addition, left of top corner library is...
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Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'established'.
Suggestion: established
...addition, left of top corner library is establish and in addition, there are two separate...
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Suggestion: Although
...ents and professors and roads are rough.Although one main admin building for reception. ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...hile, In 2016, The figure is completely change during six years time period.There are ...
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Suggestion: There
...ely change during six years time period.There are number of changes are accord firstl...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'convert' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'converts'.
Suggestion: converts
...d firstly is, they 3 different building convert in to in one main science school, next ...
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Suggestion: Secondly
... department in library for student uses.Secondly, most considerable change is one parkin...
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Suggestion: In
... parking change in to bus parking areas.In add, New building cafe is add in campus...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'added'.
Suggestion: added
...king areas.In add, New building cafe is add in campus. Moreover, Rough roads are co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09770114943 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72707659528 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.885566379 43.030603864 383% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.75 112.824112599 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.5 22.9334400587 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.0 5.23603664747 401% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17799159814 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116589563454 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140593382891 0.0843802449381 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153241687746 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143587140837 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.2329268293 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.