People today move to new cities or new countries more then ever before.
What challenges do they experience? What strategies are there to meet these challenges?
We live in the most advanced technological era in history which has changed many aspects in our life. Two of them are the easier and quicker access to transportation and communication system. Thus it is not surprising if people are mobile than ever before. However, such easiness and quickness does not mean that people might not face some challenges when moving away from home. Some potential problems are still should take into account to deal with. Two major of them are socio-cultural and technical issues.
Regarding to the change of socio-cultural condition when people re-locate, some proble...
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Some potential problems are still should take into account to deal with.
Some potential problems still should be taken into account to deal with.
when people leaving home for a new city or country
when people are leaving home for a new city or country
but some option of strategies are also available to minimising such unpleasant condition.
but some option of strategies are also available to minimize such unpleasant conditions.
Sentence: In addition, come as a stranger, people will experience loneliness for some times.
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Sentence: Finding appropriate accomodation could be a serious challenge for some people as well as finding for new job oppurtunity in some cases.
Error: oppurtunity Suggestion: opportunity
Error: accomodation Suggestion: accommodation
Sentence: In conclusion, some challenges are inevitable when people leaving home for a new city or country, but some option of strategies are also available to minimising such unpleasant condition.
Error: minimising Suggestion: minimizing
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