One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is a debated topic whether building designs have impact on people's life and work. This will lead to myriads of concerns as some people tend to believe that designs of the buildings where they live and work has serious effect on their lives. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and needs to be considered.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is a well-designed building where he lives or work can not only motivate a person but also can lead to a healthy lifestyle as well as improves productivity and mental well-being. For instance, a recent study undertaken by researchers from a university in the New South Wales asserts that productivity of many companies has improved drastically when they have redesigned their buildings by improving the lighting and ventilation.
Another pivotal aspect is employees are attracted towards organizations which are well designed. Many organizations tend to believe that this will motivate employees and relives stress. Nowadays people prefer to do better designs for their homes even though they are living in skyscraper buildings. Architects try to arrange the positions of each room in such a way that positive energy comes in. This can help the family to live a peaceful life after the stressed out day.
In view of the arguments listed above, one can conclude that designs of the buildings have various types of impacts on a person's life and work.
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- Whether the design of the buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work? 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.036 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8698181127 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6770110403 50.4703680194 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.9 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330684514743 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128827725754 0.0925447433944 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122507260986 0.071462118173 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215687956706 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112237161721 0.0609392437508 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.