You have been working in an international company in abroad Now you are going back to home country without informing your office friends Write an apology letter to these friends In the letter you should apologies to your friends explain why you ar

Dear friends, 

I hope you all doing very well! 
I am writing this letter to all of you to say sorry that I had returned my hometown without telling anyone. I want to apologize thousands of times to you with deep guilt. 

My parens told me that My grandfather had a serious disease so I have to back immediately. Another reasons is I had been feeling anxious and depressed recently, which I could not relax myself with normal thinking.

I had been told my grandfather is getting better so I realize that I am not only own you guys an apologize but also miss all my workmates so much. I recalled the most enjoy time is work in PAL which I spent amazing 3 years there with a wonderful team. All the people in the team support me a lot.

It is hard to use any word to say thank you, I hope all of you could have bright future and see you soon.

Kind regards,
Joe

Votes
Average: 6.2 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear friends,  I hope you all doing very well!  I am w...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nds,  I hope you all doing very well!  I am writing this letter to all of you t...
^^^
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ousands of times to you with deep guilt.  My parens told me that My grandfather ha...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 108, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ve to back immediately. Another reasons is I had been feeling anxious and depresse...
^^
Line 8, column 95, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...realize that I am not only own you guys an apologize but also miss all my workmates so much....
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28143712575 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39989063539 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.945760797 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25097221926 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924214946627 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891915074976 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143495829624 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726114744817 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.