Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
If the price of petrol is adding,the number of problems and pollution takes less place to disturbs the areas. Yes,I agree and believe in the above statement.
To begin with,most of the vehicles operated in the country are running by using petrol. People spend almost about 20-30 percent of salary for petrol. Due to the higher number of vehicles contain in our country they create many problems and pollution. Our eco-friendly environment gets polluted. So,sometimes increasing price of petrol gets useful to support good environment. The problem of pollution is particularly worse in the city's area.
On the other hand, there are also other way to solve the traffic problems and pollutions. Government should focus and invest more on repairing the old roads,banned the old vehicles instead of increasing the rate of petrol. For instance,the shortage of transportation gets the problem to raise the price of goods and services,the problem of starvation is nearly occur.furthermore,the government should focus the today's electronic world. If the cities people gone through electronic vehicles the problems and pollution shouldn't create. Otherwise many scientist should search for the sources of energy like solar and nuclear power to replace the petrol or fuel.
To sum up,it will clearly seen about the agree and disagree point of increasing the price of petrol according to my view. I think government should focus on the prevention's. Scientist or many researcher should prevent this difficult situations and finding out the solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i think, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41493775934 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97699841866 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551867219917 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6086024599 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214484429044 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645851254245 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619651306722 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12713879443 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222434768221 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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