Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for
some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the acceptance of television among the people. there is a widespread worry that this will lead only to myriad of concerns as some people tend to believe that it is the major reason contributing laziness among young generation. however, in my opinion, this apprehension is not warranted and needs to be rejected.
there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that nowadays tv is not only a mode for entertainment but it also provides various other benefits. It is a medium for sharing up-to-date news and informative programs. For instance, a recent study undertake by a famous university in the new South Wales states that after the introduction of National geography and animal planet, common man's awareness about animal kingdom and geography has increased considerably. another pivotal aspect is that in the present world tv has become a companion for aged people who are confined to house.
On the other hand, opponents argue that watching too much television can lead younger generation to many serious issues.For example,it will deviate students from their academic studies as it affects their concentration level. Another aspect is kids tend to get influenced from the characters of the shows or cartoons and this can change their behaviors if not controlled on time.
In view of the aforementioned statements, one can conclude that the merits to tv outweighs the demerits. however, younger generation should be educated to use this wisely so that it won;t deviate them from their academics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10943396226 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92396586192 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2530863351 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114735544223 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404579485988 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325967648348 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591598607534 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398447164766 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.