In some countries citizens are allowed to keep
a gun in their home. Do the advantages of this
outweigh the disadvantages? Discuss and give
your opinion.
The Entire globe has undergone innumerable changes over recent couple of decades. At present, keeping gun is supposed to be a useful idea for the safety of life. It has sparked a heated debate whether pros of keeping gun at home outweigh its cons or not. Here, I would like to account for the reasons to support keeping personal weapon is more detrimental than beneficial with my perception.
Numerous points can be put down to support my point of view. First and foremost, keeping a gun at home may lead to some disasterous consequences to children in the absence of thier parents at dwellings. F...
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Because it has 8 Spelling
Because it has 8 Spelling Errors.
I would like to account for the reasons to support keeping personal weapon is more detrimental than beneficial with my perception.
Suggestion: I would like to account for the reasons to support keeping personal weapons which is more detrimental than beneficial with my perception.
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I would like to account for the reasons to support keeping personal weapon is more detrimental than beneficial with my perception.
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Sentence: First and foremost, keeping a gun at home may lead to some disasterous consequences to children in the absence of thier parents at dwellings.
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Sentence: Hence, lack of etiquettes, hormonious bondings, feeling of fraternity might be stimulating factors to reinforce gun holder to kill opponent family members.
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Sentence: Further emphasizing on my point of view , in this fast paced and stressful life, people are becoming more short tempered than ever before and therefore it never takes time for them to be violent enought to use weapon for mass destruction.
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Sentence: Besides this, optimum security police and powerful legislation athourities are existing in every nook and corner of the world for justice of mankind then why people need personal weapons to shore up theirselves.
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Sentence: To turn out, offering licence to people in this secured world with exceptional law empowerment, away from danger of wild animals of forest seems a disgracefull idea. it's demerits are far more greater than merits.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 396 350
No. of Characters: 1911 1500
No. of Different Words: 245 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.461 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.826 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.603 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.165 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.058 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5