Write about the following topic:
A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercises and avoids stress
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
A person who do ample exercises, follow a nutritious diet and avoids mental pressure is regularly represented as a fit and strong person. In my opinion, to consume healthy food and a few other habits are the cornerstone which we feel our country should follow to stay vigorous.
Firstly, staying healthy is at the top of nearly everyone’s priority and our daily choice can decide how healthy we are. To begin with, In my country, some percentage of people are concerned about their health, moreover they follow enormous ways to keep themselves fit, For an instance, people should add more fresh fruits and vegetables in their daily meals it gives you adequate amount of nutrients and vitamins as healthy eating prevents variety of chronic diseases such as high cholesterol, hypertension.
Secondly, there are some habits which people should take care of that are not so bad but can easily become a problem if not taken too far. For example, sugar, caffeine, smoking, alcohol and junk food. Lastly, everyone should include exercises and physical activities in their daily routine as it’s the most important key to stay healthy and fit. As an example, strength training and cardio exercises can help to strengthen the heart and lungs as well as cut the risk of injury. Furthermore, people should try to reduce stress level as it can cause many problems like heart trouble to digestive problems.
To conclude, I would say in order to keep up a healthy and fit lifestyle it is vital not only eat balanced meals but also, we should do regular exercise, manage anxiety level, be health-conscious. Making these choices a part of your daily life will help my country to reach health goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98245614035 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67899734555 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645614035088 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7806948544 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.090909091 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3636363636 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250380401022 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852584245198 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466344811075 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146532582838 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447712778866 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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