Every third person in the world is obese, says a study. What do you think causes obesity, and what are the consequences of it? In your opinion, in what way can it be overcome?
Of late, it has been noticed that people are putting on too much of weight all over the world. This is quite alarming as it leads to many physical and mental ailments. Wrong dietary habits and lack of physical movements lead to weight gain. However, the silver lining is that the situation can be combated by adopting a few life-style changes.
The primary factor which leads to excess of weight is wrong eating habits. People consume wrong food at the wrong time, sometimes in excess quantity. Vary often, we settle for fast food with more calories and less nutrients. Even children prefer these types of junk food as their palates get used to their taste. Too much of carbohydrates, oil and sweet, if not used by the body, will result in piling up calories that turn to fat.
Over dependency on technology is another factor that leads to life style problems like weight gain. Unfortunately, the source of our income and entertainment promotes sedentary life style. As a result, outdoor activities and games have reduced to a minimum. This lack of physical exercise prevents burning of calories which settle as adipose tissue.
However, it is reassuring to note that a few changes in the way we live, can remedy the weight gain. One should make an informed decision whether to eat nutritious food or junk food. Physical movement is another aspect that can keep the body fit and fine. Apart from opting for regular exercise regime, one should walk or bicycle and take staircase instead of lift. Also, cultivating an outdoor activity will ensure a healthy body by keeping diseases at bay.
To conclude, although overweight or obesity is a major threat to healthy life the world over, preventive measures can be adopted to bring the problem under control. In other words, if we take adequate care of our body, we can lead a healthier and happier life.
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- Every third person in the world is obese, says a study. What do you think causes obesity, and what are the consequences of it? In your opinion, in what way can it be overcome? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'Vary'.
Suggestion: Often Vary
...ong time, sometimes in excess quantity. Vary often, we settle for fast food with more calo...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun nutrients is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...le for fast food with more calories and less nutrients. Even children prefer these t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, apart from, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85534591195 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46606652759 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5362485127 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0467687777149 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.013762867903 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230779148226 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0288032284587 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255875591335 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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