Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is nacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
In recent years, the violence is being developed among human beings. It is clear that the punishment is the most important problem that discuss in a lot of relevant meetings. A group of people believe the death penalty for people who committed crims violently. The others think that the capital punishment is not accepted in contemporary society. In this essay, I would argue about advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give my opinion and some instances.
By and large, the main disadvantage for death penalty of violence crims that I can mention to, is lost the costs that country spends for educating, training, and growing a person. For example, if a 40 years old man, committed a violent crime and death penalty advocated for him, the talents, the abilities, and the performance of him be losted.
On the other hand, by committed capital punishment for violent crims, the rate of crime reduced. It is a good instance, if the teenage population be noticed from the result of violent crims, they try to control themeselves in dangerous moments and finally the annual average of crims significantly decreased. For the second advantage, I would point to developing security feelings and reducing stress in society. If punishment do not executes in country by governments, violence behaviours appear in cities and urban areas, therefore, make a mess. On the opposite side, by capital punishment, security and piece become the main aspect of human beings lifestyle.
To conclusion, the main disadvantage of death penalty is westing and losting the expenditures that spend on growthing a person, and the two most important advantage are decreasing the violent crims and mess in society by advocating capital punishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, so, therefore, for example, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16725978648 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89004783519 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2741974207 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415683961505 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13768939244 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108886911161 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252751668909 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108177780031 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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