In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement. Discuss why it is so and the outcomes of this situation. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
From the past few decades, it has observed that people moved to a different place after their retirement, while others move to the countryside of their county. there are many facts behind this trend, like living in a peaceful environment, overall living expenditures, and this results in degrading the health care system of the nation.
There are several vital factors plays an important role to shift people from one location to another site when someone gets retired from his or her services. firstly, after retirement, people want to live in a peaceful environment where there is less crime and less crowded, and they feel secure. secondly, after retirement, older people want to settle down where the expenditure cost is low, and they can live comfortably with the nominal money. For example, research has conducted most of the people after retirement moved to urban areas as first preferences as they can easily spend the last years of their life, because these areas are less polluted, and the crime rate is low where they can easily spend the rest of their life.
one outcome will bring this trend, as it would increase the liability to take care of the older people in that region, which results in worse of overall health care systems. As people move to other countries for a better life, but when it comes to medical facilities where the nation has given the free medical facilities to immigrants which goes to worse because it creates the imbalance between demand and supply of health care system which results into outflows of nation health. For example, a survey conducted by Harvard University that Canada seems an ideal place for the older people, but at the same time is confronted by the issues of overload health care system which degrades their health services.
To sum up, many people move to different locations or nation after retirement to have a better life in a pleasant atmosphere. However, it may lead to a problem of the county health care system because of improper balance between demand and supply of medical facilities
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-30 | Lucky94 | 73 | view |
| 2018-10-09 | SATPREET SINGH | 73 | view |
- Some people think that not only should professional sports and cultural enterprises be sponsored by the government but also that amateur adult and children groups should get funding Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support you 33
- Art is considered as an essential part of all cultures throughout the world . However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate arts and turn their focus towards Science , technology and business .What do you think that is?What could be done to encour 78
- The Best way to improve health is to do regular exercise. To what you agree? 67
- In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement. Discuss why it is so and the outcomes of this situation. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 73
- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ove to the countryside of their county. there are many facts behind this trend, like ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
... gets retired from his or her services. firstly, after retirement, people want to live ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...and less crowded, and they feel secure. secondly, after retirement, older people want to...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...n easily spend the rest of their life. one outcome will bring this trend, as it wo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91930835735 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43690914683 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495677233429 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.362220317 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.181818182 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5454545455 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201313988465 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847007093718 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771406565705 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138073197296 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634596249444 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.