You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At the present day and age, nations unite by helping each others in time of needs. Wealthy countries give monetary assistance to the developing countries; unfortunately it is not the solution to the problem in poverty, so the first world nations should provide other kind of helping aid. this author completely agrees to the statement that there are another ways of reaching out a hand to poorer countries than giving money.
To begin with, there are many means on helping the third world countries like providing food subsidies. Because of this, scarcity of food in the developing nations that can lead to hunger could be prevented. Malnutrition is one of the main causes of death of children in South Africa, this is due to poverty and decreasing food sources. If the progressive governments from American continent, Europe and Asia share their food resources to this struggling country, the mortality rate of young children will significantly decrease and the society will start to gain good health.
Furthermore, as the wells off nations are continuously progressing in terms of education, they can help in improving the educational system in the third world countries. through this, the new generation will be able to receive quality education that will prepare them to become a skillful and knowledgeable workforce in the future. As a result, the economy of the developing countries will progress as the key to the success is the competent working population.
Lastly, in terms of calamities and disasters, rescue aids are most needed by the affected civilization and the developed countries have advance technology and equipment to provide help. In the Philippines, typhoon Yolanda left many parts of the country devastated. The united States sends a rescue mission using their air crafts to help fasten the retrieval of dead bodies from flood and landslide.
To recapitulate, other than financial assistance, the developed countries can lend their hands to the developing nations through food subsidies, developing a better educational system and calamity and disaster rescue missions. The hope for a better world is becoming clearer due to the unity between different nations of helps each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, lastly, so, third, well, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28328611898 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85733058105 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57223796034 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4509373834 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227609158847 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788163544046 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654613666428 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131545713456 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800972029691 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.