Teenage is a tender age, teenagers are not considered very mature, hence in the US most of the parents create rules, to make sure that teenagers do not stay out till late unless their parents are with them. I strongly believe that there has to be a certain set of rules and regulation that teenagers should follow to enforce the sense of discipline in them.
For instance, several teenagers like to mimic adults and behave like them, they want to stay out till late, because of this they may not wake up early and start missing school, which will affect their grades, hence it is important that parents make rules to avoid such situations. In addition, it has been observed, teenagers are becoming addicted to alcohol and drugs frequently because their parents are not paying attention to them due to their busy work schedule. Also, teen pregnancy has become more frequent due to negligence from their parents. Teenagers are having sex early because of no rules and restrictions, teenagers are not ready to become parents and take responsibilities, teen moms tend to dropout high school and do not get the proper education.
Furthermore, enforcing a curfew from an early age makes teenagers more responsible, they are more prone to learn time management early. Moreover, teenagers with strict time boundaries are more respectful to their parents, for example, they inform their parents in advance before making plans with their friends, also they inform their parents about their whereabouts on regular basis.
In conclusion, by setting up a curfew time for teenagers, parents can ensure the safety and behavior of their children. However, parents should be flexible to provide enough space for their teenagers, so they can still communicate openly with their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: to time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, may, moreover, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10996563574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59700159486 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3267520097 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.7 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130314458511 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597084124732 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382645813229 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879993115835 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211378044566 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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