It is widely held belief that home is considered as best place for formal education than school for child's overall development
It is widely held belief that home is considered as best place for formal education than school for child's overall development.although, many may see it as positive phenomenon,it is not a trend without drawbacks.both the merits and demerits will be discussed before a reasonable conclusion is drawn.
The first and foremost disadvantage is that there will be non conducive academic environment at home. While in schools , there is an appropriate timings to learn particular subject with timings constraints.School teaches an individual about discipline and value of time such as waking early in the morning, dressing up properly and doing homework assignments and worksheets on time.However, a teenager who performs his primary or secondary education at his own place get deprived of such precious privileges.
Another possible disadvantage is that it leads to lack in several extremely important skills such as confidence level, communication skills and peer pressure. A child when performs and communicates with his other students, he will come to know the value of competition. In a recent survey carried out by an eminent sociologist Mr. John Smith, at the University of California , it is found that teenagers who studies with other children at school are performing approximately 20% better in problem solving skills than who are learning at their home in Beijing.
On the other hand topic also has a positive shade. The prominent advantage is flexible timings. An individual can set his entire timetable according to his desires and requirements of day to day life. One can take breaks from even after a couple of minutes. The second positive side is young minds can receive individual attention at home while at school there are significant number of people where it seems to impossible for an educator to pay one to one attention which causes detrimental impact of students performance.
After analysing both the views, I am of the opinion that respected authorities should design the infrastructure of schools with homely environment and aura by allocating funds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33434650456 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21753258725 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620060790274 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.331464445 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.25 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24058833572 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069415302025 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129604619456 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14675006891 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169571213599 0.056905535591 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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