Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience.
it is often argued that the best teacher in life is experience. A majority of people opine that gaining experience is better, while others refute this supposition and think that it has adverse ramifications. In my opinion, I strongly believe that written materials and attending to educational institutions is more effective. this essay will first discuss the pertinent views of my assertions, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Undoubtedly, formal education and using books is a proven scientific approach in learning. it means that it has been used since the beginning because it is always proven to be the best way to instil knowledge to an individual. To cite a prime example, a recent study shows that more than 95 percent of learning institutions use books and formal institutions to teach people subjects or specialties. Thus, it is quite evident that attending an educational institution if more beneficial.
Furthermore, attending university study teaches an individual to focus and intensively learn subjects in school. As a matter of fact, these institutions perform examinations to assess the knowledge of a student. For instance, my university performs written and oral examination quarterly to gauge what a student learned. Hence, it is clear that having these tests will require students to focus and learn subjects in school intensively.
In conclusion, considering what has been discussed above, it is indeed more effective to be in a formal school or learn from books than having an experience. it is recommended that students must focus on their studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.336 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12362865911 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1090904754 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180090531235 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618768988519 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621417981727 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110977311382 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551226707371 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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