some people fail in schools but end up being successful. why do you think there is the case? and what is the most important thing to succeed in life?
In the last few decades, there is an upsurge in the number of successful people without graduating universities or colleges, which definitely has set a good example and inspired teenagers. My following essay will declare the hidden reasons behind the scenario and suggest some crucial qualities to succeed in life.
To commence with, there is a plethora of excuses for the success of those who drop out high school or universities. Initially, in terms of the education system which always biased on academic achievements, our conventional teaching method is incapable of develop students’ inborn assets. Traditional schools do not give students the chance to go further in their life and may be more a hindrance than a help. In addition to that, with respect to the ones who fail in theoretical learning themselves, they have their own passion, desire and determination to pursue their career and do something different. In all probability, they are adept at art, trading, music, etc, which makes them do not take studying seriously. Besides, they also have the opportunities to develop themselves in real life as well as learn practical and soft skills by means of working in a company or build their own startups.
Apart from that, there are some pivotal factors making enormous contribution to the success of individuals. First and foremost, perseverance and the willingness to apply yourselves to develop skills and capacities, deepen your disciplinary knowledge and manifest great attempts, determination and ambition are the pre-requisite criteria to achieve victory. Furthermore, a clear goal is one of the most momentous determinants leading to success. It helps people understand what they want to pursue and how they will do it.
To recapitulate, academic learning is undeniably a great background for future jobs but it is not a mandatory element.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, apart from, in addition, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3063973064 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09228786103 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649831649832 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3748920155 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138177896951 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441637926064 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400136227629 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654826339004 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380639366621 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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