more and more people are suffring from helth problams coused bg a modren life style which can not be trated with modren madicien , some people think that return to traditional medicien should be encorage , do you agry or sic agree
All the money in the world cant buy you back good health.the problems of people suffering from health problem causee by a modren life style and they are not satisfy with modren medicien is an issue that has been brought up by many people in the past . i compleatly go with treditional medicen because natural treatment is the best way to help out from new diseases . let us analuze this topic
there arevvarious root causes that need to be taken into consideration , whem we talk about the problem of while in the time of modren treatment and using modern medicen , sudden change will occure in human body through that make you very eeak . where as in the case of traditional medicen ,there eipp be no side effects like weakness ,etc there also dicreased instance of problems such as rashes and skin disease.
Again tthere are numerous reasons why we ahould side with , the very populae belife that this topic present . to start with the most notable one stems from the fact that in some unique disease like cancer , fortunatly they are lot of medicen available in traditional way . th neutralizer abstract from the naturae, acts to our body , and it reacts comfortable you will not find any other helth issues while using traditional medicine
Taking into account of arguments disussed , we can conclude that to return to traditional medicen should be encorage .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84051724138 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47074729172 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668103448276 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.950462148 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.428571429 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1428571429 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234801704697 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917908230752 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642150110439 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138643568249 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432605798779 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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