Schools should cut funding for extracurricular activities such as sports and the arts when school buildings are in need of repair.
when school buildings are in need of repair there are two aspects that school authority have to consider whether the fund has to cut from extracurricular activities or not.
The first and primary aspect is the condition of building and it affects the academic of the students or not and the second aspect is the aesthetic appearance of the building.It is solely depend on the authorities of the school what is their priority.If the building is a potential threat to the student's life and academics, such as there are severe cracks on the roofs and walls of the building and if there is any requirement of any equipment like computer, display boards and experimental setups for students.Then funds from extracurricular activities has cut down to fulfill the requirement of the building repairs.
secondly ,if the funds are required for Painting of the building and any other equipment which embellish the aesthetics of the building then it should not be the priority of the school authority to cut down the funds from extracurricular activities. As extracurricular activities are equally important for students as academics.
If the funds are required there are many ways to raise it rather than to cut it from extracurricular activities, there are several NGO that are willingly helpful to provide funds and there are some big corporate which also provide funds under their sustainability initiatives.
At the end i conclude that if the building is not suitable and threat for students life and academics then cut down of funds from extracurricular activities are appropriate but when it
is for cosmetic purpose of building the it is not justified.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13653136531 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12687900509 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446494464945 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.939584862 60.3974514979 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.0 118.986275619 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.1666666667 23.4991977007 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.21951772744 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445435376695 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25900125527 0.0831039109588 312% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118615698707 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200224821006 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121478669896 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 14.1392134831 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 48.8420337079 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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