Tobacco should be treated as illegal like other drugs. Smoking has not a single positive issue but lots of negative effects and therefore, it should be banned.
These days, there is growing trend to see people demanding to ban the tobacco and treat it as illegal like other drugs. As such, it has both merits and demerits, although I am opinion that latter outdo former. I lay down reasons to support my viewpoint with relevant examples.
There are myriads of argument in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that smoking is very good conversation starters as we can see many people in group smoking and talking. People not only realised the negative impact of smoking such as health problem like heart disease, lung cancer and many more, but also measured the gravity of its relevance. Hence, all these downsides stand smokers in bad stead as far as smoking is concerned.
There, however, some pitfalls which can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of smoking. The primary one lies in this fact that it is the cause of many diseases like heart, lung cancer and many more. Another overt aspect of this argument is that smoking cost lot of money. For instance, a pack of cigratte costs 25 Australia dollar and many people cannot afford that. Hence,it is apparent from aforementioned discussion why many are concerned about smoking.
In view of my argument outlined above one can conclude that despite some positives, the disadvantage of smoking are indeed too great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as illegal 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...ban the tobacco and treat it as illegal like other drugs. As such, it has both merit...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
..., a pack of cigratte costs 25 Australia dollar and many people cannot afford that. Hen...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...nd many people cannot afford that. Hence,it is apparent from aforementioned discuss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48296170974 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647321428571 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0967187523 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0769230769 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11609560855 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380787347088 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551679676892 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068322540164 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386085024198 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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