Some people believe that local shopkeepers should sell should sell sell local food .whenever available do you agree or disagree?
It is unquestionably true that some adolescent ponder that local city market shopkeepers have thing selling whole the product as well as local food.The root can that everyone shop might do advertisement on the television.There are strong opinion can promotion essential food all in all they can selling good costs on the food.There are manifold reasons behind for this.I am partially and I discuss both views.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right way.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant today everyone shopkeeper think that they would selling all product what why they can start promotion whole the materials.For instance,electronic devices,trend
clothes,furniture, make kit and so on.After that,in few days they have very tough competition one to another off spring.Then, local shopkeeper can give advestesement on internet as far as they will upsurge new customers.
Moving on this drawback on sell local food while there are no denying that fact the,in couple of week everybody have hectic schedule in their life.In fact, female and male they do equal work on job places.Moreover,sometimes they must exhausted in their work.Hence,
they have never will power.Thus,they can cook the food.Last but not least,they should buy the local food.Most of time there have very harmful to the health.For example,There are causing plethora disease like obesity,heart,blood pressure,carbonic extra.I think that,local food is not bad but also check the places local food prepare us because place will hygienic is good impact on local food.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand it is no doubt today everybody shopkeeper do advertisement on websites than they might good impact on business.on other hand,in my point of view,dweller can like local food.Thus shall be check the places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, in fact, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41522491349 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44175355839 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622837370242 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.866550978 49.4020404114 301% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 391.25 106.682146367 367% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.25 20.7667163134 348% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.0 7.06120827912 482% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237007095545 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145598882534 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592950137658 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116468492057 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054668020937 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.2 13.0946893788 307% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.34 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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