It is certain that, health related problem is increasing day by day in the world. In some nation's the average weight person is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are denied I will discuss about causes of problem and how to solve issue in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are many causes of this problem first and foremost,nowadays,
most people are totally change their life style is the main reason they can prefer eating fast food which is easily available in market but it is tasty food and it is not hygienic food there are many diseases issue create such as blood pressure, heart beat are soon. Nextly, they avoid a home made food and most people is more seating at work in office. Furthermore, yougsters weight is increasing there is no excuse in our body and can feel that unhealthy. For instance, a person is from used for vehicles and not used to own foot
On the other side, there are ample ways to solve the problem every person should duty to avoid from restaurants food. And more time prefer eating to home made food. It's a hygienic food however, person is eating this food healthily life style in our country. Furthermore, the person is more and more excise joined in their life. After, eating a special diet such as meat, fish are adding on our diet. moreover,the government arrange health related awareness camp start in our cities because of, person is say and health more knowledge about them.
Before wrapping it up,itwould be noexaggeration to state that various factors led this ugly growth but it is a not hard but to crack however, the joint efforts of parents and school is mandatory to uproot get ride from society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85333333333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43466630157 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493333333333 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.5879179674 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160814046929 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641961511994 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757878151811 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113770039354 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908872930341 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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