Some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports. Why is this? What can be done to tackle the problem?
Sport is a vital step to have a healthy life although, many individuals enjoy more online games instead of participation in physical activities such as cricket or football. This essay will discuss the reason behind such behaviour and possible solution to control this attitude.
Online games involve the person mind more as compared with physical activity. The visual graphics and mind-blowing creativity in it keeps the player attracted towards such platforms and as it does not involve more physical workout, the gamer can play for longer duration without any hurdles. A recent survey revealed that students who play computer games are more intelligent and their decision-making capacities are higher as compared with others.
The best way to solve these problems is to involve students in physical education. It will also promote a balance in life. Addition of more physical lessons in the school syllabus will ensure that more and more children take part in sports, therefore promoting sports activities in the school environment by introducing the importance of sports at national and international level will encourage children to take part in physical education. For instance, gamers are persuaded to take a more physical activity like running and volleyball so that their life can have balance in physical and mental work.
In conclusion, More people prefer to play on-screen games because of the design in such games which keep them tempted and little physical workout help them to play longer durations as a consequence, players addiction to computer games is more. Introduction of physical classes in the school curriculum can improve the conditions and bring some hope.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34962406015 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77955850862 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3422244529 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.363636364 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136865081924 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586437176603 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408008616379 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920283117124 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416021377959 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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