Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Each year numerous species of plants and animals are lost due to human activities. Deforestation and water pollution are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity worldwide, and the most viable solutions to tackle this problem are to create protected areas on land and introduce strict regulations against water pollution.
The destruction of forests brings about different environmental problems, including the extinction of a variety of wildlife. Cutting down trees causes a lot of species to lose their habitats and condemns them to a certain death. For example, the ongoing deforestation of the Amazon rain forest has drastically reduced the great variety of animal and plant life it once had.
Another major issue with similar implications is water pollution caused by humans. Untreated industrial refuse is constantly dumped into water bodies, posing a great threat to marine ecosystems. In fact, toxic substances destroy the homes of millions of aquatic creatures, forcing them to seek refuge elsewhere. This is the case of sea turtles, which are now considered to be an endangered species.
Therefore, it is crucial that we effectively address these issues. Creating protected areas for animals who face extinction is one possible solution to protect forest biodiversity. In natural parks and reserves they will be nourished and protected from harmful activities.
As per marine pollution, governments could introduce laws and fines for industries that illegally dispose of their waste in the sea. Financial penalties will deter such harmful actions and indirectly help keep the environment of sea life clean and unspoiled. The Great Barrier Reef, for instance, is home to a wide range of creatures and is protected by strict laws and regulations.
To sum up, in order to preserve biodiversity of the forests and oceans, humans should protect natural habitats and abstain from wrongful actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44630872483 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89909775676 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627516778523 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4801670937 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898660381147 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258160934091 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289548415241 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447349767984 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389023697399 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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