To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In this era of internet, almost all the trendy stuffs are first generated in the urban atmosphere. This cities are embellished by bounty of resources and funding from the goverment and are a matter of pride to the nations. Most of the culture have their iconic cities, which were the center of the evolution of their society. Thus by studying the characteristics of the major cities one can get a comprehensive idea about the characteristics of the society.
If we focus on the modern society then we can Identify every nation has their own symbolic city like, Dhaka for Bangladesh, Tokyo for Japan, New Delhi for India etc. All of these major cities has a great influnce over the culture developed and propagated in the country. One of the main reason behind this is the new age of connectivity. Most facilities are available in the major cities, so people gather in the cities more than ususal. If we look at the major protests that was formed in Bangladesh, almost all of them were started from its iconic city Dhaka. For example, the recent protest for the execution of war criminals in Shahabag, Dhaka. Most of the major bodies of the goverment along with major infrestuctures are also situated in the Dhaka city. Thus many important issues like passing a law to enforcing it, all had the first impact here. And how the people react actually shapes the response from the government. Many other customs of the society like observing different festivals are also done with grandiose in those major cities. Thus they gave a pretty good representation of the society.
Not only that, If we look in the past and focus on the major civilizations like the Greeks and Romans, all their cultures were city centric. For the Romans, rome was the center of everything. From the developement of the democracy by forming senate to the educational prowess, all was centered in rome. Thus to study the roman civilization, the city of rome is of great importance. Similarly, by studing the city of Mekkah and their traditions one can get a good idea about the birth of Islam and the muslim culture. Thus these major cities are a imprint of their culture and styding them results in go idea about the society.
Although it is true that the major cities grab the main focus most of the time, there many folk culture that has helped to shape a society. For example. in bangladesh, many famous poems, folk singers had came up from the the rural area and captured the soul of the rural people. By doing this they have enriched the culture of Bangladesh which one cannot just ignore. They helped to shape way of thinking and in cases helped to form a better society. If one only focuses on the urban counterpart to study a society , it is possible that some of these major contributions get ignored.
So, by studying the major cities of, one can get a very good idea abouth the charateristics of the society. Nevertheless to get a more complete idea, one should not completely ignore the rural and folk side of that culture and society.
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- TOEFL TPO 43 - Integrated Writing Task 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, thus, as for, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2500.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71698113208 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60519985729 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443396226415 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.9 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2680102679 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165833800943 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496834757295 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359501004337 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102694382804 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343135877168 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.