All parent should be required to volunteer their time to their childrens school.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent of which you agree or disagree with the recommendation.
Participation in educational settings by parents of students is crucial to the development of education and moral values. Parents, however, do not always see this as a vital part of their children’s’ schooling. Mothers, fathers, and guardians alike, should put forth every effort to maintain familiarity with their child, teachers, and education staff to help children thrive in their studies.
First, if parents do not see fit to participate in their children’s activities in school, it is likely the child’s grades will not flourish. By volunteering time, parents can get to know all staff that leads their child’s development on a daily basis. Maintaining a healthy relationship with school staff can also help give parents more readily available resources if a problem arises. Being on a first name basis with teachers and other staff can give parents the upper hand with their pupil’s education by being “in the know.” Parents who offer up their time for educational volunteering are much more likely to develop healthy relationships with staff than parents who do not. Also, even though it is stereotypical, teachers may tend to be favorable towards children whose parents attend PTO, fundraisers, sporting events, classroom parties, etc. over those whose parents do not.
Furthermore, volunteering when the need arises, shows children leadership. This is a crucial part of a child’s development that is learned through watching others participate in it. Children are more likely to grow up into hard-working, responsible adults if they have watched their parents practice headship and a lending hand during their youth. For example, if the school is hosting a fundraiser car wash, children whose parents show up to help with the day’s festivities, are more likely to show up and show support than children of parents who make no effort to be there. It is a proven fact that children learn by example. Hence, parents should always volunteer their time and effort when a school activity is in place to show children the importance of being a part of something meaningful.
Finally, history shows that students whose parents do not contribute in their schoolwork, tend to have worse outcomes in their education. For example, if “Jane’s” parents never show up to parent teacher conferences, how will they be informed that she has been skipping biology class everyday for two weeks? When parents are not involved in the education, children tend to veer off the expected path due to not suffering consequences of their actions. When parents feel welcomed by familiar faces of school staff, they are more likely to participate in such meetings.
Even though it may pose difficult due to time constraints and busy schedules, it is pertinent that parents put forth effort to be engaged in all aspects of their child’s education. However hard and endearing it may be, the students’ benefits outweigh the hardships of parents’ who do not take part in their daily school activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 545, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...upil's education by being 'in the know.' Parents who offer up their time ...
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Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...hat she has been skipping biology class everyday for two weeks? When parents are not inv...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2582.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3347107438 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14245534781 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48347107438 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 763.2 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9887571439 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.952380952 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0476190476 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268961434692 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101153979421 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580897273783 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178825083547 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334685004062 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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