I disagree this statement. On the other hand, from my point of view, earning a lot of money can be a standard of evaluating success, but not the only way.
Some of people are considered successful but they don’t have a lot of money. As long as the realization of the ideal is success, and rich or not have nothing to do. They always work very hard although they are poor. Some of them only have poor family and low social status，but they still believe that they can make their dreams come true if they keep working very hard. Finally, they often get what they want and become successful after they try their best. But in some time, although someone like Beethoven has become very famous and successful they still not very rich because they don’t want to be worldly because of money.
Not all people who have a lot of money are successful. Nowadays, there are plenty of people earn much money, but they are always have no achievement, they get the money from eldership rather than raise it by themselves. They use a lot of money and never worried about it. They have no dream and worry of their future, so there’s nothing they want to achieve and become lazier and lazier. And the other people get the money by illegal ways. It’s very harmful to the society and these behavior will be censured and punished by laws. That’s why many people really have much money but they are not successful.
All in all, whether people are successful should not be judged by how much money you have.
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor-bike. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor-bike. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor-bike. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Do you agree or disagree with this definition of success. 56
- The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate only locally produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the people') or simply say ''Some people''.
Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
...luating success, but not the only way. Some of people are considered successful but they don&...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...le earn much money, but they are always have no achievement, they get the money from...
^^^^
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this behavior' or 'these behaviors'?
Suggestion: this behavior; these behaviors
...'s very harmful to the society and these behavior will be censured and punished by laws. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33640010103 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5600678453 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.625 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231760868804 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110428315098 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898917259511 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175644107447 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619899200668 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.