Man is the only social animal on this planet. Despite of being in a survivable planet, man’s propensity to lead the sophisticated life made him to build his own world on Earth. In this contemporary world, where the technological advantages are taking place in higher alacrity, the rustic cultural aspects are left bereft by man in such rate itself. But even today, such cultural traditions are found and followed in villages and country sides of the nation. It is villages on which the city people depend on adapting the rustic and pristine cultures in order to balance their urban quotidian humdrum. Hence I disagree that that it is necessary for cities to receive the financial need where as the villages are in need of it more than the cities as they are the ones who protect and preserve the cultural traditions.
Firstly, the cities are being made by developing a particular village.Take for example Bangalore, which is now called as a Silicon city and a IT hub of India. But prior being named so, it was a village with the rich Indian cultures and traditions by name ‘Bendakaaluru’. It’s apt weather and land for construction of city was recognized by Kempegouda who built the city later on. Despite the decrease in cultural aspects as the cities grew and the Western advent took place at the area, when people visit the villages surrounding the city experience the cultural shock. Therefore, this instance proves that it is the villages that preserve the traditions that represent the nation. If they are given the financial aid, then they sustain for longer period.
Moreover, the villages maintain the pristine nature and some of the bucolic medical practices proved to be better than the modern Allopathy medicines. For example, Ayurveda, which was originated in ancient India is still being practiced in the city areas by taking the village products. The Ayurvedic products proved to have no side effects to any kind of diseases are viable medicines to intake to cure any kind of disease. This cultural aspect that comes under the domain of health care comes from villages not from urban areas. Thus in order for these kind of practices to suffice, the villages have to be financed. In turn which is meant to state that the cultural traditions are protected not by funding cities.
There are some cases that the people might argue that the immigrants and the tourists from other countries come to cities if they visit the country. Hence, in order to make them acknowledged with our traditions we have to grow such traditional practices in cities by funding them. But, it is not forgettable that the resource for organizing such practices is from the village areas itself.
In a nutshell, the cultural traditions are being known to us not from the cities. They are being contrived by certain ways in the rustic areas with certain rules and regulations. The villages are the past of the cities, where the culture exists in a copious amount where as it is in the state of paucity in many city areas. These cultures and traditions not only build us as a proper personality but also help us to represent our nation. But, as these are only alive mostly in the village areas, it would be ineffective if one decides to finance the cities in order to preserve such traditions.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2748.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 563.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8809946714 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70804464517 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447602131439 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 888.3 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2430976901 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6538461538 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267781140632 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792478238819 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626679726092 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166894967237 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743880513157 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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