One of the controversial issues today relates to whether fixed punishment should be implemented for each type of crime or certain circumstances and motivation for committing the crime should be noticed before deciding any kind of punishment.I fully believe that some people are forced to stole small things like food, clothes, etc to feed their children. Where, some of them commit it because of their greediness. Here, i am going to shed some light on this questions from both points of view and extend my ideas from my opinion.
To begin with, there are people who argue that judiciary must penalised every one who who try to commit any sorts of crime.
If there should be compulsory penalising system for every criminals then the number of increasing rate of lawbreakers will reduced in the near future. Similarly, people will think twice before doing such a negative activities. For instance, according to the law of Saudi Arabia, there is a law where people's fingers cut down if they try to break the law and stole things like car and other goods. Moreover, it is in top to become a most strict country all over the world. Likewise, if strict rules and regulations is implemented smoothly in a country then everybody will afraid of doing crime because they have proper knowledge about the consequences about doing bad things. For examples, In North korea, there is death penalty system for each people who are involved in crime like rape, serial killer,kidnapping, etc. Somehow, fixed punishments will help to deduce the numbers of criminals as well as eradicate negative activities like robbery, kidnapping and many more.
On the other hand, it is possible to make an opposing idea, people often believe that before declaring any kind of penalty particular circumstances should be taken into account because some people are compelled to engage in bad activities. The main reason to involve in it is one an only due to poverty. In addition, scarcity of food and clothes directed them into robbery. Furthermore, orphan children who face loneliness are also engaged in those activities because they do not get proper guideline and education. That's why, i believe that motivation for committing it also noticed properly so that innocent people will not get strict penalty. For example, 2 years ago in my country, one innocent mother was hampered badly because she stole food from the bakery to feed her child. In this case i think there was no any fault of that women its all about poverty. Therefore, sometimes loyal and honest people get punishment due to wrong decisions.
To sum up, both the arguments have their merits, however, on balance, i tend to believe that certain circumstances should be taken into account which help more innocent people. And only main criminals will get strict punishments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 469.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02132196162 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67332506612 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524520255864 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9158224025 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365493026802 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864591155868 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102469513212 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19648463056 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861760560663 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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