Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
Correct the information in the article
Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
Suggest what the magazine should do about the situation.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to tell and correct you about the wrong information that was mentioned in your magazine about the Surat's diamond in June month's edition.
I am a resident of Surat and have a subscription of your magazine since last 2 years. Following regularly this magazine has given me wide knowledge about a variety of topics. There was an article about Surat's diamond which mentioned that some of the diamonds sold in the world are polished and cut in Surat. Well, I would like to correct this false statement, not some but majority of the diamonds sold in the world are polished and cut in my town.
Since your magazine has many international subscribers, the wrong information about the diamond polishing and cutting may create a different image of my town. Surat is known for this business across the globe and it is important for people to know this unique quality that my town own in the diamond business.
I would urge you to correct the information about the fact for the number of diamonds polished and cut in my town. In August month's edition, you ought to give the correct information in your magazine, which will change the wrong notion of people that they read about my town.
On any other doubts or questions, you can mail me on Abc @gmail.com
Looking forward to the correct article in August's month edition.
Your's faithfully,
John Patel.
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...of people that they read about my town. On any other doubts or questions, you ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5195589065 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5125 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.6630435644 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223252444589 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974382213314 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598779477574 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11886652553 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809163771247 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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