I agree with the author to some extent that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college with slight modifications to the idea. This will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Since any nation sadly yet actually still consists of division of class: upper , middle and lower class, not every student has got the financial backing to afford a standard education. Hence by making a uniform and singular curriculum every student irrespective of whether they are rich or poor, can benefit equally.There is a slight downhill to this method. But the tuition fees will be same and thus unreachable to many poor kids.
Education is a crucial foundation for the future of any aspiring individual. This method will ensure a single level platform for every student so that equal oppurtunities are rendered. Even the poor village kid will study the same courses and subjects as the rich kid in a metropolitan city. Keeping the currilculum uniform the teaching methods will have to be modulated according to the milieu of the school. A unsophisticated child would have a entirely different perception from a city kid.
This method will be a boon for parents and teachers too. Parents wouldn't be worried about choosing the right school for their kid. Teachers will be overjoyed as they will be eble to shift to a better institutions easily without learning any new subject due to the same curriculum throughout the nation.
Given all the advantages of the theory, there is a disadvantage too. Every student would have dissimilar preferences. It wouldn't be right to force a kid with a passion for physics, to memorise the chords of a guitar, or teach an art lover the mysteries of the universe and its creation. Then they would become frustrated as their future career track becomes parallel to the courses taught forcibly.
I would like to end by suggesting the author to consider the aforementioned points before coming to the conclusion of a uniform curriculum in schools. With slight modifications mentioned above this idea would be feasible.
- "Schools should be responsible only for teaching academic skills and not for teaching ethical and social values." 58
- The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves 16
- "The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people." 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, so, still, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05157593123 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83793687637 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558739255014 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4705915669 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7894736842 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47368421053 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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