Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Currently, it is believe that in this essay, i am absolutely be in agreement more advantage than disadvantage, for people doing anything in the home using machines rather than by hands. In my opinion, most people prefer do anything of using machines like finishing of home's working. This development sharp helping, all the work notably in home is going to finish by fast.
On the one hand, the main profit of the problem is going to more simple, if all of people want to use machines than by hands, when they finishing homework. In the period modern like now, machine's development give positive effect to many people. It's because, everyone feel with using machine, they needn't focus on the one work, but they can focus of the other work in jointly. For example, when doing two or more jobs by jointly, if using by hands are going to finish longer, just using machine all of working are finished by jointly. The development machines as one of choice for economizing of expanding. It's due to, they must not pay many labor, enough paying cost operational on the machine. As an example, an industry's company in general using the modern machine to minimalism cost of operationally. As the result, on the now period all of influence machine useful must accepted very well.
On the other hand, there is some trouble doing of working by hands. So, this problem bring the negative effect, if mechanical technology development rejected by most people. Because of many people have bustle outside house which impossible doing of working in home, thus have not more time doing something in home. On several case, some families nothing do of something in home, like assignment to cleaning their home. Whereas they are able to using mechanic to clean anything than using by hands. So there is no doubt, for using mechanics which more simplify user to do anything.
In conclusion, even though there is many challenges when have done anything by hands. The mechanism development is able to give all of something in home become more simple.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun labor seems to be countable; consider using: 'many labors'.
Suggestion: many labors
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'there are many challenges'?
Suggestion: there are many challenges
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in general, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85590778098 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53444409845 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492795389049 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.861629508 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6842105263 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250471862913 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078891808939 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385008050045 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160672652047 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025175044853 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.