Young people play pivotal role in society. Some people believe that young people that
youth were depended too much on their parents than today. However, others disagree. In my opinion young people are not independence to their family as in the past. H feel this way for two reasons which H will explore in following essay.
First, young individual could have financial independency. When you have yourself job thus you can rich amounts of money which help you to take financial independent. The more financial you have, The better indipend decision you make. One of my friend's experience is a good case in point. I have friends, She started her job when she was 16 years old. she was first child family and her parent respect her decision because she had her independency in her family as she had worked for herself. this circumstance helps her feel so independency. this example clearly illustrates that because young people have their own financial independence they have not been depend on their family.
Second, social approach change in value, If you live in modern society therefore you can see the cultural change in family which is shows that how parent respect to their children decision. My own experience is a good example. I remember that when I was 18 I do wanted to make my own decision and travel to India but I have never down it. because I felt that my parent never do me allow to go there because they think that I could not afford my self. but in similar situation after 7 years later my little sister could travel by herself alone to every country this happened because of social change which happened in earlier. this example clearly shows that how much society has changed and parents have more respected to their children.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that young people are not dependent too much as before. It not only for financial independency, but also for social approach are changing in value.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me people believe that young people that youth were depended too much on their pa...
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Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dual could have financial independency. When you have yourself job thus you can rich...
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Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...rted her job when she was 16 years old. she was first child family and her parent r...
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Line 4, column 494, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...r family as she had worked for herself. this circumstance helps her feel so independ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...mstance helps her feel so independency. this example clearly illustrates that becaus...
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Line 4, column 660, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...nancial independence they have not been depend on their family. Second, social appr...
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Line 6, column 388, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...I felt that my parent never do me allow to go there because they think that I could n...
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Line 6, column 452, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... think that I could not afford my self. but in similar situation after 7 years late...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ocial change which happened in earlier. this example clearly shows that how much soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80838323353 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49177354962 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51497005988 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9724375093 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4761904762 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308104609165 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975793158898 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945035940645 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199205638456 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564405021649 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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