The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
“Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station’s coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.”
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author of the argument tries to convey that the increment of the time devoted to broadcasting national news along with reduced time devoted to the local and weather news have genereated diplease among the viewers so as to recieve complaints on whether and local news coverage, and also have resulted in local business owners cancelling advertisement agreements. this argument seems intuitive and well directed when looked at a superficial level. However when critically examined, the wording and the evidence provided for the argument suggest that the argument needs more subtantiating and reinforecement. At the current state of the argument, it is rife with subtle but key ommissions and bypasses, that needs specific evidences to justify or clarify.
The author of the argument conveys that the most of the people have complained about the coverage on the local and weather news after the change. but he/she fails to mention which aspect of the coverage the audience are taking a disliking in. For example, the content of the weather news may have been false and not dependable. Another example would be the station forcasting unimportant news, whereas there are more critical situations in the local area that needs coverage. In such cases, simply reverting to the previous structure of delivery is not the solution. thus evidence is needed to clarify that that people are actually concerned with the timing structure, rather than the content.
The author further conveys that the advertisement contracts with local businesses have been cancelled, and links the change of structure of news times to it. this kind of cancallation may suggest many other concerns, rather than a time allocation change. For example, the station, in covering more national news, if they are biased towrds a specific political party or heavily chastising a political party, businesses would not be comfortable runnung their advertisments in such a news sation. thus it would be crucial to analyse the national news contetn they are forecasting, which may show possible reasons for local businesses to pull out from advertisement agreements, rather than attach it to the time duration change
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Another aspect to look at is whether the station is actually losing advertisment revenue. current agreement holders cancelling their advertisment agreements does not necessarily mean that noe new businesses join with the station; local or national. thus it would be interesting to look at the advertisement revenue of late, rather than looking at the cancellation of the exisitng agreements, as it would give more direct insight on the matter.
The author of the given argument neesd to consider looking at the aspects specified above to clarify his argument more strongly. As at now, it is rife with holes that weakens the argument severly.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The author of the argument tries to convey that the increment of the time devoted to broadcasting national news along with reduced time devoted to the local and weather news have genereated diplease among the viewers so as to recieve complaints on whether and local news coverage, and also have resulted in local business owners cancelling advertisement agreements. this argument seems intuitive and well directed when looked at a superficial level.
Error: recieve Suggestion: receive
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: genereated Suggestion: generated
Error: cancelling Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: diplease Suggestion: displease
Sentence: However when critically examined, the wording and the evidence provided for the argument suggest that the argument needs more subtantiating and reinforecement.
Error: reinforecement Suggestion: reinforcement
Error: subtantiating Suggestion: substantiating
Sentence: At the current state of the argument, it is rife with subtle but key ommissions and bypasses, that needs specific evidences to justify or clarify.
Error: ommissions Suggestion: commissions
Sentence: Another example would be the station forcasting unimportant news, whereas there are more critical situations in the local area that needs coverage.
Error: forcasting Suggestion: forecasting
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The author further conveys that the advertisement contracts with local businesses have been cancelled, and links the change of structure of news times to it. this kind of cancallation may suggest many other concerns, rather than a time allocation change.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: cancallation Suggestion: cancellation
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: cancelled Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For example, the station, in covering more national news, if they are biased towrds a specific political party or heavily chastising a political party, businesses would not be comfortable runnung their advertisments in such a news sation. thus it would be crucial to analyse the national news contetn they are forecasting, which may show possible reasons for local businesses to pull out from advertisement agreements, rather than attach it to the time duration change
Error: towrds Suggestion: towards
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: contetn Suggestion: content
Error: runnung Suggestion: running
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: sation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: advertisments Suggestion: advertisements
Error: analyse Suggestion: analyst
Sentence: . Another aspect to look at is whether the station is actually losing advertisment revenue. current agreement holders cancelling their advertisment agreements does not necessarily mean that noe new businesses join with the station; local or national. thus it would be interesting to look at the advertisement revenue of late, rather than looking at the cancellation of the exisitng agreements, as it would give more direct insight on the matter.
Error: advertisment Suggestion: advertisement
Error: noe Suggestion: non
Error: exisitng Suggestion: existing
Error: cancelling Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The author of the given argument neesd to consider looking at the aspects specified above to clarify his argument more strongly.
Error: neesd Suggestion: need
Sentence: As at now, it is rife with holes that weakens the argument severly.
Error: rife Suggestion: rise
Error: severly Suggestion: No alternate word
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argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- not OK
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Need to argue against the conclusion always. For this topic it is:
Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 451 350
No. of Characters: 2327 1500
No. of Different Words: 204 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.608 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.16 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.748 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 177 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 146 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 95 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 37.583 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.442 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.398 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.666 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e genereated diplease among the viewers so as to recieve complaints on whether and local...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...rs cancelling advertisement agreements. this argument seems intuitive and well direc...
^^^^
Line 1, column 451, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ted when looked at a superficial level. However when critically examined, the wording a...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ocal and weather news after the change. but he/she fails to mention which aspect of...
^^^
Line 5, column 568, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...ucture of delivery is not the solution. thus evidence is needed to clarify that that...
^^^^
Line 9, column 495, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...ir advertisments in such a news sation. thus it would be crucial to analyse the nati...
^^^^
Line 9, column 495, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...ir advertisments in such a news sation. thus it would be crucial to analyse the nati...
^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...h it to the time duration change . Another aspect to look at is whether t...
^
Line 14, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Current
...s actually losing advertisment revenue. current agreement holders cancelling their adve...
^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...in with the station; local or national. thus it would be interesting to look at the ...
^^^^
Line 14, column 249, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...in with the station; local or national. thus it would be interesting to look at the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 16.3942115768 189% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 2260.96107784 106% => OK
No of words: 450.0 441.139720559 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33555555556 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82143610048 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482222222222 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 705.55239521 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2394795506 57.8364921388 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.368421053 119.503703932 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6842105263 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 6.88822355289 174% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248960713949 0.218282227539 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757776201897 0.0743258471296 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829258041395 0.0701772020484 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135831276506 0.128457276422 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970506133693 0.0628817314937 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.3550499002 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.5979740519 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32208582834 110% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 98.500998004 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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