Governments should not have to provide care or financial support for elderly people because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
This has become a debating issue that whether or not government should support senior citizens. Although, this is a duty of elderly to save money for his retirement, I disagree with the idea that older persons should not receive any assistance from the author.
There is no doubt that government passes through financial hardships due to diverse allocation of funds to the important sectors like health services, education, better infrastructure and creating opportunities. Apart from this, if government also have to provide financial support to older people then it might possible that some wors...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 358 350
No. of Characters: 1771 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.35 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.947 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.71 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.861 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.551 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5