The graphs below compare the number of cosmetic procedures performed on males and females in Korea in 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
A glance at the two figures provided reveals the popularity of various forms of plastic surgery among Korea male and female in 2004.
Not surprisingly, women enjoyed a higher engagement in cosmetic surgery compared to men. As one would respect, eyelid surgery is by far the most prevalant form of plastic surgery enjoyed be women, with over 300,000 times. Rhinoplasty came to second with the population of nearly 300,000 operations. Meanwhile, laser skin resurfacing and breast enlargerment were far less popular than the previous. They made up about 200,000 and 150,000 respectively. The number o...
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Sentence: As one would respect, eyelid surgery is by far the most prevalant form of plastic surgery enjoyed be women, with over 300,000 times.
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Sentence: Meanwhile, laser skin resurfacing and breast enlargerment were far less popular than the previous.
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Sentence: Interestingly, while breast enlargerment and eyelid surgery were only dominated among females, hair transpilantation and abdominoplasty turn out to be predominated in males.
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